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All of blade/speranza wreslters
Sun Apr 07, 2024 12:00 am by Blade/speranza
If you ant a march with any of thme let me know this is also a post for them
Sperzana bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22432-speranza-doncy?highlight=Speranza
Blade bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22536-blade-mccharge-the-blade-of-the-world?highlight=blade
Catherine: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22906-catherine-the-great-celestial?highlight=Catherine
Sperzana bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22432-speranza-doncy?highlight=Speranza
Blade bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22536-blade-mccharge-the-blade-of-the-world?highlight=blade
Catherine: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22906-catherine-the-great-celestial?highlight=Catherine
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Improvement/Critique Thread
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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread
Well I think I should consider making a wrestler who's not a member of team mental, I'll get onto it later. I think I know what I could do for it.
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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread
I think trying a character that is not connected to them in anyway is a good first step.
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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread
I'll get onto it tomorrow then.
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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread
So I figured I'd stop by and see what people's partially honest thoughts were about my characters, chiefly my main girl Natasha. I say partially since if its all negative I don't really want to hear it, looking for constructive feedback and thoughts. anyway pm me your thoughts
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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread
May I recommend that those things be handled by PM. People are more likely to be honest if they don't have the entire board listening in.
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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread
[quote="Bluemouse":3rmu1fsh]May I recommend that those things be handled by PM. People are more likely to be honest if they don't have the entire board listening in.
thanks forgot to put that in
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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread
Hey, folks! So, I thought I'd pop in here and see if anyone had any constructive criticism to offer regarding my roleplaying/character/personal hygiene/whatever. I'm still quite new to this, so I'm open to whatever criticism folks might have to help me become a more entertaining person to RP with. I'm open to either private message flagellation, or public humiliation via this thread. You know, whatever works for you.
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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread
Hello there!
Step 1: RP.
When you have completed that, step 2 might have something to do with criticism and stuff. I'm not sure.
Now, as far as flagellation goes, I'd prefer to flagellate you outside. The fresh air makes for more relaxing floggings.
Step 1: RP.
When you have completed that, step 2 might have something to do with criticism and stuff. I'm not sure.
Now, as far as flagellation goes, I'd prefer to flagellate you outside. The fresh air makes for more relaxing floggings.
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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread
Sup Nerds.
I have a simple one.
So, I've been experimenting with bios for a long time. Specifically the lay outs. Just asking what you think of the current lay out of my bios. What's good and what's bad about it.
Thank you!
I have a simple one.
So, I've been experimenting with bios for a long time. Specifically the lay outs. Just asking what you think of the current lay out of my bios. What's good and what's bad about it.
Thank you!
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