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Post by Deus001 Fri Aug 30, 2013 9:56 pm

Well I think I should consider making a wrestler who's not a member of team mental, I'll get onto it later. I think I know what I could do for it.

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Post by Tatyina Fri Aug 30, 2013 11:10 pm

I think trying a character that is not connected to them in anyway is a good first step.

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Post by Bluemouse Fri Aug 30, 2013 11:10 pm

I agree.

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Post by Deus001 Fri Aug 30, 2013 11:15 pm

I'll get onto it tomorrow then.

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Post by daemongirl Mon Sep 02, 2013 4:10 am

So I figured I'd stop by and see what people's partially honest thoughts were about my characters, chiefly my main girl Natasha. I say partially since if its all negative I don't really want to hear it, looking for constructive feedback and thoughts. anyway pm me your thoughts


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Post by Bluemouse Mon Sep 02, 2013 4:32 am

May I recommend that those things be handled by PM. People are more likely to be honest if they don't have the entire board listening in.

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Post by daemongirl Mon Sep 02, 2013 4:38 am

[quote="Bluemouse":3rmu1fsh]May I recommend that those things be handled by PM. People are more likely to be honest if they don't have the entire board listening in.
thanks forgot to put that in
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Post by Lunchador Fri Oct 04, 2013 10:45 pm

Hey, folks! So, I thought I'd pop in here and see if anyone had any constructive criticism to offer regarding my roleplaying/character/personal hygiene/whatever. I'm still quite new to this, so I'm open to whatever criticism folks might have to help me become a more entertaining person to RP with. I'm open to either private message flagellation, or public humiliation via this thread. You know, whatever works for you.

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Post by Bluemouse Fri Oct 04, 2013 11:16 pm

Hello there!

Step 1: RP.

When you have completed that, step 2 might have something to do with criticism and stuff. I'm not sure.

Now, as far as flagellation goes, I'd prefer to flagellate you outside. The fresh air makes for more relaxing floggings.

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Post by Cirno Thu Jan 02, 2014 11:54 pm

Sup Nerds.

I have a simple one.

So, I've been experimenting with bios for a long time. Specifically the lay outs. Just asking what you think of the current lay out of my bios. What's good and what's bad about it.

Thank you!

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