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All of blade/speranza wreslters
Sun Apr 07, 2024 12:00 am by Blade/speranza
If you ant a march with any of thme let me know this is also a post for them
Sperzana bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22432-speranza-doncy?highlight=Speranza
Blade bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22536-blade-mccharge-the-blade-of-the-world?highlight=blade
Catherine: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22906-catherine-the-great-celestial?highlight=Catherine
Sperzana bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22432-speranza-doncy?highlight=Speranza
Blade bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22536-blade-mccharge-the-blade-of-the-world?highlight=blade
Catherine: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22906-catherine-the-great-celestial?highlight=Catherine
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Friendly critique thread?
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Harukasan
Old_Man_Tai
Bluemouse
Alexandra
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Re: Friendly critique thread?
You dingleberry. Jealous of rp'ers? Weird. Do you wish you had all the glory and adulation that accompanies being a good message board rp'er? I will punch you in the eyebrow.
What hood do you come from that has goats in it? And why did you have to leave it to post here? I don't get it. Also, what's wrong with what you do?
What hood do you come from that has goats in it? And why did you have to leave it to post here? I don't get it. Also, what's wrong with what you do?
Bluemouse- Posts : 11144
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Re: Friendly critique thread?
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1. This dingleberry wants the Glory in EVERYTHING. Since I only got.....(<.< >.>) "One Shot At Glory." YEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH....
2. I was joking. Im aware Tat and Hawthorne are better than me. I aint Jealous. But I do seek to be good like them. Why? Cuz they are good writers. Couple months ago I had a web series, but i suffered from shitty writing at times. Perhaps if i was a better writer, maybe my show would have done better and i could have continued it.
3. You cant punch me in the eyebrow if I shave them off!! OHHH YEAH! WHAT THEN!?
4. I hail from the Hoods of Texas. Where there is enough guns drugs and goats for everyone! ^ ^
5. I was joking. I never left home.
6. "What's wrong with what I do?" Well to put it blunty... EVERYTHING & NOTHING.
1. This dingleberry wants the Glory in EVERYTHING. Since I only got.....(<.< >.>) "One Shot At Glory." YEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH....
2. I was joking. Im aware Tat and Hawthorne are better than me. I aint Jealous. But I do seek to be good like them. Why? Cuz they are good writers. Couple months ago I had a web series, but i suffered from shitty writing at times. Perhaps if i was a better writer, maybe my show would have done better and i could have continued it.
3. You cant punch me in the eyebrow if I shave them off!! OHHH YEAH! WHAT THEN!?
4. I hail from the Hoods of Texas. Where there is enough guns drugs and goats for everyone! ^ ^
5. I was joking. I never left home.
6. "What's wrong with what I do?" Well to put it blunty... EVERYTHING & NOTHING.
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Lobo- Posts : 9780
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Re: Friendly critique thread?
One LAST thing, don't force it. If anything I said doesn't gel with your way of thinking, it's entirely possible my brain is just too screwy. If you aren't letting this stuff flow naturally, it won't be fun for anyone.
There, that SHOULD be enough mea culpas.
There, that SHOULD be enough mea culpas.
Hawthorne22- Posts : 2587
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Re: Friendly critique thread?
Thanks for all the advice, guys, especially you, Hawthorne, and those of you who PM'd me.
Gonna try and put all this into action...
Gonna try and put all this into action...
Alexandra- Posts : 10846
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Re: Friendly critique thread?
[quote="Lobo"]
Oh great... More awards toward Tatyina & Hawthorne... >.>
quote]
Dont even it try it Lobo, considering Ive been here longer then 80 percent of this board, having been a member since 2003/4 that means that I and I ALONE am the most Underrated RPer on here! And that is an around I proudly brag about! So HA! As for any advice towards Alexandra....Dunno if its been said yet, but dont let anyone force you into a match you dont like, if they want a boxing match and you hate boxing matches, then stand up and say no....otherwise youll just get offers for hells be damned boxing matches.
Oh great... More awards toward Tatyina & Hawthorne... >.>
quote]
Dont even it try it Lobo, considering Ive been here longer then 80 percent of this board, having been a member since 2003/4 that means that I and I ALONE am the most Underrated RPer on here! And that is an around I proudly brag about! So HA! As for any advice towards Alexandra....Dunno if its been said yet, but dont let anyone force you into a match you dont like, if they want a boxing match and you hate boxing matches, then stand up and say no....otherwise youll just get offers for hells be damned boxing matches.
Old_Man_Tai- Posts : 9566
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Re: Friendly critique thread?
[quote="TaiKamiya":1m383597][quote="Lobo":1m383597]
Oh great... More awards toward Tatyina & Hawthorne... >.>
quote]
Dont even it try it Lobo, considering Ive been here longer then 80 percent of this board, having been a member since 2003/4 that means that I and I ALONE am the most Underrated RPer on here! And that is an around I proudly brag about! So HA! As for any advice towards Alexandra....Dunno if its been said yet, but dont let anyone force you into a match you dont like, if they want a boxing match and you hate boxing matches, then stand up and say no....otherwise youll just get offers for hells be damned boxing matches.
Oh great... More awards toward Tatyina & Hawthorne... >.>
quote]
Dont even it try it Lobo, considering Ive been here longer then 80 percent of this board, having been a member since 2003/4 that means that I and I ALONE am the most Underrated RPer on here! And that is an around I proudly brag about! So HA! As for any advice towards Alexandra....Dunno if its been said yet, but dont let anyone force you into a match you dont like, if they want a boxing match and you hate boxing matches, then stand up and say no....otherwise youll just get offers for hells be damned boxing matches.
Oh trust me, I don't let people do that. XD
I can name a dozen people who've wanted hentai matches with me and gotten turned down. :X
Alexandra- Posts : 10846
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Re: Friendly critique thread?
this thread seems to be mostly positive and constructive. Would you guys like a thread where anyone can posts threads asking for a critique?
do you think it be useful?
do you think it could stay on topic?
do you think it be useful?
do you think it could stay on topic?
Tatyina- Posts : 27237
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Re: Friendly critique thread?
I think it could be very useful if done properly, as in people actually taking a turn on who gets the criticism, keeping on topic, keeping it light.
Done improperly, its just a bunch of newfags who cant triforce insulting each other.
Done improperly, its just a bunch of newfags who cant triforce insulting each other.
Old_Man_Tai- Posts : 9566
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Bluemouse- Posts : 11144
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Re: Friendly critique thread?
[quote="Bluemouse":2nn3z34j]I'll be good.
I'm not worried about you <.<
Tatyina- Posts : 27237
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