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Any girl up for a boxing match?

Tue Jan 15, 2019 2:02 pm by headshotgunny

Hey folks, I would love to play Sasha again and she needs a worthy opponent, either another kawaii or an older boxer^^ Any takers?

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Yo! Looking for rivals!

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Looking for a rival for Cici! Maybe someone she can hate, maybe a friend! Someone she can fight on the regular xb I intend to make her a better wrestler and need a true rival to battle against x3 let me know if yur interested!

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Looking for a long-term, single (or multi!) ppv storyline for GASTER or Alice (Or both!)

Fri Jan 11, 2019 6:20 pm by Vcom7418

Hoi!

So, with new PPV rules requiring more of a build to one's matches...I figured I'd try and look for at least one!

Currently enjoying the GASTER sisters way too much so let's get something with them to do Very Happy

But, to specify what I am looking for:

For GASTER, I am looking to boost her profile on AFW with a couple of, if not wins, then very very close losses. As such, looking for one of the 3 rivalries. Either a simple rivalry of technical skill, a fellow chuunibuyo gal to feud with...or a …

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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread

Post by M.J.Caboose14 on Mon Aug 14, 2017 3:44 am

I'll read it Very Happy Also I tend to use very few commas

So I think you are fine lunchador Razz

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Post by Vcom7418 on Tue Aug 15, 2017 10:33 am

I WANT THE TRUTH!!!

What are my weak points and where can I improve my writing?

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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread

Post by RadiantKarna332 on Tue Aug 22, 2017 4:21 am

So, for those who have RPed with me, what do you guys think about my writing?

I am aware that I have a rather... limited vocabulary, considering that I don't even speak English in real life. But is there anything else you guys can point out about my writing?

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Post by Cy_Man on Tue Aug 22, 2017 6:19 am

You're writing is very good, I can completely understand it. And seriously? You don't speak English for real? You could have had me fooled then since your English writing truly is very great and convincing. Smile

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Post by RadiantKarna332 on Tue Aug 22, 2017 6:35 am

Well, it's because I'm an English teacher, so I'm required to know English. But in real life, I speak zero English outside my class.

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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread

Post by Old_Man_Tai on Sat Aug 26, 2017 7:40 pm

I'm glad to see this thread brought back to life! Kudos to all of you looking to help people out!


Vcom, I can't answer that yet, but you and I are long overdue for that thread I promised you, so we'll get a chance then to go over stuff.

Radiant, you're writing seems pretty damn good to me, and, like Pie-Man, I didn't even realize english wasn't your first language. If there's a flaw in your writing, or a way to improve it, it'll take a smarter man than I to tell you what it is, personally I've been impressed and enjoyed every second of our work together so far.

So, here's a rare moment. Who wants to critique me and my stuff? I promise I'll only curse the first 5 of you with eternal damnation for doing so. XD


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Post by Mystery Dragon on Sat Aug 26, 2017 7:51 pm

I'm well aware of my flaws. I just need someone to tell me them as bluntly as possible anyway.
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Post by Old_Man_Tai on Sat Aug 26, 2017 8:10 pm

The only flaw I know of yours is that you keep getting the better of me verbally, AND FOR THAT YOU SHALL....um...probably continue doing it, cause your better at the wordy words.


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Post by LARIATO on Sat Aug 26, 2017 8:24 pm

Just gonna casually throw my hat into this ring and see what happens....

be gentle pls

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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread

Post by M.J.Caboose14 on Sat Aug 26, 2017 9:12 pm

Welp...*Cracks fingers* this is gonna be a long one....

Spoiler cause it's so long:
You suffer from SIPS

Slightly Imperfect Posting Speed...which tbf...I am just as bad at...

(I lied it wasn't a long one)

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