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Looking for New Matches

Thu Jul 11, 2019 9:38 am by RadiantKarna332

So, I've been doing some postings here and there these last few days, but I haven't made any new match lately, so I've been thinking if there is anyone interested to have the threads with me. Feel free to PM me here or send me a message via discord, KarnaKarna #1166. Looking forward for anyone interested.

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Sat Jul 13, 2019 3:15 pm by anime_hentaifighter

Looking for stuff to do here. So if anyone is interested then let me know

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A some break

Fri Jul 05, 2019 12:40 am by skip-stop

Hi

I know that I have threads with only three people, but I am too lazy to write in PM to everyone. I take a little break. I had an unlikely event that turned my life upside down. I hope that in one or two weeks I will return to normal

Acuya, Edmund, I’m sorry

Peace to everyone

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Post by M.J.Caboose14 on Mon Aug 14, 2017 3:44 am

I'll read it Very Happy Also I tend to use very few commas

So I think you are fine lunchador Razz

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Post by Vcom7418 on Tue Aug 15, 2017 10:33 am

I WANT THE TRUTH!!!

What are my weak points and where can I improve my writing?

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Post by RadiantKarna332 on Tue Aug 22, 2017 4:21 am

So, for those who have RPed with me, what do you guys think about my writing?

I am aware that I have a rather... limited vocabulary, considering that I don't even speak English in real life. But is there anything else you guys can point out about my writing?

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Post by Cy_Man on Tue Aug 22, 2017 6:19 am

You're writing is very good, I can completely understand it. And seriously? You don't speak English for real? You could have had me fooled then since your English writing truly is very great and convincing. Smile

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Post by RadiantKarna332 on Tue Aug 22, 2017 6:35 am

Well, it's because I'm an English teacher, so I'm required to know English. But in real life, I speak zero English outside my class.

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Post by Old_Man_Tai on Sat Aug 26, 2017 7:40 pm

I'm glad to see this thread brought back to life! Kudos to all of you looking to help people out!


Vcom, I can't answer that yet, but you and I are long overdue for that thread I promised you, so we'll get a chance then to go over stuff.

Radiant, you're writing seems pretty damn good to me, and, like Pie-Man, I didn't even realize english wasn't your first language. If there's a flaw in your writing, or a way to improve it, it'll take a smarter man than I to tell you what it is, personally I've been impressed and enjoyed every second of our work together so far.

So, here's a rare moment. Who wants to critique me and my stuff? I promise I'll only curse the first 5 of you with eternal damnation for doing so. XD


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Post by Mystery Dragon on Sat Aug 26, 2017 7:51 pm

I'm well aware of my flaws. I just need someone to tell me them as bluntly as possible anyway.
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Post by Old_Man_Tai on Sat Aug 26, 2017 8:10 pm

The only flaw I know of yours is that you keep getting the better of me verbally, AND FOR THAT YOU SHALL....um...probably continue doing it, cause your better at the wordy words.


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Post by LARIATO on Sat Aug 26, 2017 8:24 pm

Just gonna casually throw my hat into this ring and see what happens....

be gentle pls

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Post by M.J.Caboose14 on Sat Aug 26, 2017 9:12 pm

Welp...*Cracks fingers* this is gonna be a long one....

Spoiler cause it's so long:
You suffer from SIPS

Slightly Imperfect Posting Speed...which tbf...I am just as bad at...

(I lied it wasn't a long one)

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