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Match for Takeichi

Tue Jun 12, 2018 6:13 am by GrandAkumaShogun

So with my other two guys having their own matches I figure I should do something with my first character on here, Takeichi Mori. If anyone is interested feel free to post here or get in touch through a pm so we can plan it out. I can either have Takeichi remain a jobber or begin to work him towards being a more serious competitor.

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Kawaii Opportunities

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Hey, guys!

With the kawaii title match at Avalanche taking on an interesting wrinkle with the interruption by the Brat Pack, we are moving forward with the overall kawaii storyline, and at this point I'd just like to take stock of what kawaiis are out there that are interested in participating in a cohesive storyline.

Can't make any promises about titles or what exactly each girl's given role would be. We can talk a little more about the specifics of where the story is going soon, but I …

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Match or RP?

Wed Jun 13, 2018 3:48 pm by Lotuswarrior

I'm just looking to do something while I wait for match replies. Really want to get some characters cemented a bit with a rival or some interactions with other characters here.

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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread

Post by M.J.Caboose14 on Mon Aug 14, 2017 3:44 am

I'll read it Very Happy Also I tend to use very few commas

So I think you are fine lunchador Razz

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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread

Post by Vcom7418 on Tue Aug 15, 2017 10:33 am

I WANT THE TRUTH!!!

What are my weak points and where can I improve my writing?

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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread

Post by RadiantKarna332 on Tue Aug 22, 2017 4:21 am

So, for those who have RPed with me, what do you guys think about my writing?

I am aware that I have a rather... limited vocabulary, considering that I don't even speak English in real life. But is there anything else you guys can point out about my writing?

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Post by Cy_Man on Tue Aug 22, 2017 6:19 am

You're writing is very good, I can completely understand it. And seriously? You don't speak English for real? You could have had me fooled then since your English writing truly is very great and convincing. Smile

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Post by RadiantKarna332 on Tue Aug 22, 2017 6:35 am

Well, it's because I'm an English teacher, so I'm required to know English. But in real life, I speak zero English outside my class.

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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread

Post by Old_Man_Tai on Sat Aug 26, 2017 7:40 pm

I'm glad to see this thread brought back to life! Kudos to all of you looking to help people out!


Vcom, I can't answer that yet, but you and I are long overdue for that thread I promised you, so we'll get a chance then to go over stuff.

Radiant, you're writing seems pretty damn good to me, and, like Pie-Man, I didn't even realize english wasn't your first language. If there's a flaw in your writing, or a way to improve it, it'll take a smarter man than I to tell you what it is, personally I've been impressed and enjoyed every second of our work together so far.

So, here's a rare moment. Who wants to critique me and my stuff? I promise I'll only curse the first 5 of you with eternal damnation for doing so. XD


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Post by Mystery Dragon on Sat Aug 26, 2017 7:51 pm

I'm well aware of my flaws. I just need someone to tell me them as bluntly as possible anyway.
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Post by Old_Man_Tai on Sat Aug 26, 2017 8:10 pm

The only flaw I know of yours is that you keep getting the better of me verbally, AND FOR THAT YOU SHALL....um...probably continue doing it, cause your better at the wordy words.


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Post by LARIATO on Sat Aug 26, 2017 8:24 pm

Just gonna casually throw my hat into this ring and see what happens....

be gentle pls

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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread

Post by M.J.Caboose14 on Sat Aug 26, 2017 9:12 pm

Welp...*Cracks fingers* this is gonna be a long one....

Spoiler cause it's so long:
You suffer from SIPS

Slightly Imperfect Posting Speed...which tbf...I am just as bad at...

(I lied it wasn't a long one)

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