Re: Improvement/Critique Thread

[M.J.Caboose14]

I'll read it Also I tend to use very few commas

So I think you are fine lunchador

[Vcom7418]

I WANT THE TRUTH!!!

What are my weak points and where can I improve my writing?

[RadiantKarna332]

So, for those who have RPed with me, what do you guys think about my writing?

I am aware that I have a rather... limited vocabulary, considering that I don't even speak English in real life. But is there anything else you guys can point out about my writing?

[Cy_Man]

You're writing is very good, I can completely understand it. And seriously? You don't speak English for real? You could have had me fooled then since your English writing truly is very great and convincing.

[RadiantKarna332]

Well, it's because I'm an English teacher, so I'm required to know English. But in real life, I speak zero English outside my class.

[Old_Man_Tai]

I'm glad to see this thread brought back to life! Kudos to all of you looking to help people out!


Vcom, I can't answer that yet, but you and I are long overdue for that thread I promised you, so we'll get a chance then to go over stuff.

Radiant, you're writing seems pretty damn good to me, and, like Pie-Man, I didn't even realize english wasn't your first language. If there's a flaw in your writing, or a way to improve it, it'll take a smarter man than I to tell you what it is, personally I've been impressed and enjoyed every second of our work together so far.

So, here's a rare moment. Who wants to critique me and my stuff? I promise I'll only curse the first 5 of you with eternal damnation for doing so. XD

[Mystery Dragon]

I'm well aware of my flaws. I just need someone to tell me them as bluntly as possible anyway.

[Old_Man_Tai]

The only flaw I know of yours is that you keep getting the better of me verbally, AND FOR THAT YOU SHALL....um...probably continue doing it, cause your better at the wordy words.

[LARIATO]

Just gonna casually throw my hat into this ring and see what happens....

be gentle pls

[M.J.Caboose14]

Welp...*Cracks fingers* this is gonna be a long one....

Spoiler cause it's so long:

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