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Match for Takeichi

Tue Jun 12, 2018 6:13 am by GrandAkumaShogun

So with my other two guys having their own matches I figure I should do something with my first character on here, Takeichi Mori. If anyone is interested feel free to post here or get in touch through a pm so we can plan it out. I can either have Takeichi remain a jobber or begin to work him towards being a more serious competitor.

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Kawaii Opportunities

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Hey, guys!

With the kawaii title match at Avalanche taking on an interesting wrinkle with the interruption by the Brat Pack, we are moving forward with the overall kawaii storyline, and at this point I'd just like to take stock of what kawaiis are out there that are interested in participating in a cohesive storyline.

Can't make any promises about titles or what exactly each girl's given role would be. We can talk a little more about the specifics of where the story is going soon, but I …

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Match or RP?

Wed Jun 13, 2018 3:48 pm by Lotuswarrior

I'm just looking to do something while I wait for match replies. Really want to get some characters cemented a bit with a rival or some interactions with other characters here.

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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread

Post by Harrier on Mon Aug 07, 2017 7:47 pm

Thank you for your input.

I know that writing PMs is better than an open thread.
I am also not taking it too seriously, you would know what I mean when you knew which dramas took place here already regarding low self esteem.^^

But on the other hand, some people get their slots full in no time with such an open invitation, and I am curious to find out why this is not the case with me anymore.

Or another example:
Everyone looses a thread partner here and there, and I explicitly state in the blog entry that I don´t bother asking people why they abandoned this and that, assuming they have reasons to do that. But when people first approach me and then stop to write, this makes me still a little bit curious.

To be bluntly honest, I know that my command of the english language is good enough to write in understandable terms. I have some rules for myself which I apply to every post, I am approachable for compromise and my win/loss rating is even or rather negative and I sell moves. So it is not the obvious reasons and I want to know what the problem may be. Boring? Repetitive?

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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread

Post by Sylvie on Tue Aug 08, 2017 1:15 am

I suspect the problem is more imagined than real. Looking through your history, you have many threads that stretch to 6, 7, 10+ pages. You're clearly able to get and keep matches.

Everyone gets dumped occasionally, often for reasons that have nothing to do with them. There have been several occasions where I've had to leave the site abruptly because of real life disasters.

As for your writing--you're fine. You're no worse than the average writer on this website. Everyone would like to write better, and none of us are perfect, but you're not losing partners over that.

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Post by TheWamts on Tue Aug 08, 2017 1:19 am

Feel free to shit on me, I'm probably not going to read it anyways.

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Post by Teenwrestler on Wed Aug 09, 2017 6:14 am

I like Rping with Harrier, never ever had a problem with his style Very Happy
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Post by Underdog21 on Thu Aug 10, 2017 1:59 am

So...anyone have any critiques of my characters or writing style? And be honest, please.

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Post by bricktown on Thu Aug 10, 2017 2:06 am

I'll ask for critiques as well. Aside from posting speed, I'm working on that problem already. Razz

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Post by M.J.Caboose14 on Thu Aug 10, 2017 2:44 am

I am unable to give critiques that are negative...sorry

But I will say everyone needs more hugs!

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Also following Teenwrestler's model I will say I like Underdog's style and enjoy rping with him!

Bricktown I have not rped with but I think you're god too man

Wamts...you need to read more Razz

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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread

Post by Lunchador on Mon Aug 14, 2017 2:50 am

Harrier- I know we haven't done anything together, yet, and I couldn't really speak to the problems you're having with threads, but you've been on my list of people to try to have a thread with at some point, if that means anything.

Underdog- We haven't RP'ed in awhile, but I really enjoyed the threads we had together, in the past! The Akamatsus are fun characters, and I'd totally be up for having another thread with you again, sometime!


Also, I totally invite anyone to go ahead and tee off on me, too. I'm sure there's lots of areas I could improve in, or stuff in my writing that's a total drag, so I'm open to hearing what I could be working on.

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Post by acuya on Mon Aug 14, 2017 3:02 am

Lunchador wrote:Harrier- I know we haven't done anything together, yet, and I couldn't really speak to the problems you're having with threads, but you've been on my list of people to try to have a thread with at some point, if that means anything.

Underdog- We haven't RP'ed in awhile, but I really enjoyed the threads we had together, in the past!  The Akamatsus are fun characters, and I'd totally be up for having another thread with you again, sometime!


Also, I totally invite anyone to go ahead and tee off on me, too.  I'm sure there's lots of areas I could improve in, or stuff in my writing that's a total drag, so I'm open to hearing what I could be working on.

You sometimes put commas in odd places.

That's about all I've got. :-/

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Post by Lunchador on Mon Aug 14, 2017 3:16 am

acuya wrote:

You sometimes put commas in odd places.

That's about all I've got. :-/


That, is a fair point.

Seriously, though, I'll try to work on that.  Thanks for pointing it out!  Open to hearing about anything else bothersome that I might be doing!


While I'm at it, forgive me if this isn't an appropriate place to ask this, but since it's an improvement/critique thread, would anyone mind reading some stuff I've been writing off-site?  It's short story stuff, in a pulp vein, with a female crime-fighter getting into shenanigans.  Roughly 8,000 words at a go.  I've been working on it for awhile, and I want to know if anyone else might find it entertaining.

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