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Champions & #1 contenders
Tension/MvM/MvF
Mon May 13, 2024 5:49 am by TheLoneWanderer
As a first outing for this rebooted account, I'd like to engage some opponent in a matroom, or something equivalent, with a focus on BJJ, Catch Wrestling, MMA, etc. It can range from actual training (preferably of the character I play but I can do yours even if I'd like further teaching for BJJ.) to an extreme match. Either way, message me if you wanna bite. While I do like femdom and all that, I will do my best to treat any participants equally.
You can pick either Senji or Hiroyuki but I'm …
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All of blade/speranza wreslters
Sun Apr 07, 2024 12:00 am by Blade/speranza
If you ant a march with any of thme let me know this is also a post for them
Sperzana bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22432-speranza-doncy?highlight=Speranza
Blade bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22536-blade-mccharge-the-blade-of-the-world?highlight=blade
Catherine: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22906-catherine-the-great-celestial?highlight=Catherine
Sperzana bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22432-speranza-doncy?highlight=Speranza
Blade bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22536-blade-mccharge-the-blade-of-the-world?highlight=blade
Catherine: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22906-catherine-the-great-celestial?highlight=Catherine
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Thunder Clyne
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Thunder Clyne
Name: Lacus "Thunder" Clyne
Sex: Female
Age: 20
Eyes: light blue
Hair: Pink
Height: 5'6
Weight: 160
Nationality: Japanese
Alignment: Face
Entrance music: EMOTION By Meer Campbell
Wrestling Information
Strategy: submission hold and striking
Style: Striker
Type: Fighter
Preferred Attacks: Striking DDT and clothesline
Preferred Matches: normal match
Endurance: 4/5
Strength: 5/5
Speed: 3/5
Defense: 5/5
Technique: 2/5
Favored Moves: DDT and Powerbomb
Finishing moves: Lacus Bomb and Clyne DDT
Characteristics
Physical Appearance: she has a build body Big Boobs and she a Cute and nice lady
Personality: nice helpful for a newcomer and do what she can
Past/History: After the war with the Gundam and being a chairman of Z.A.F.T long time. She left to do something else and put someone else to take care of Z.A.F.T. after that she got bored don't know what to do and have not seen action for a long time. Then out of the corner of her eyes, she saw a poster of AFW and was curious. She was interested but don't know what to do. She talked to Kira and Kira was okay with it so with her husband's approval she joins. What hope will she bring to the table?
Wrestling Attire:
Fun Facts:
AFW Information
Record:
Wins:
Losses:
Draws:
Championships/Accomplishments:
Friends:
Allies:
Rivals:
Enemies:
Crushes:
^ Bio
Sex: Female
Age: 20
Eyes: light blue
Hair: Pink
Height: 5'6
Weight: 160
Nationality: Japanese
Alignment: Face
Entrance music: EMOTION By Meer Campbell
Wrestling Information
Strategy: submission hold and striking
Style: Striker
Type: Fighter
Preferred Attacks: Striking DDT and clothesline
Preferred Matches: normal match
Endurance: 4/5
Strength: 5/5
Speed: 3/5
Defense: 5/5
Technique: 2/5
Favored Moves: DDT and Powerbomb
Finishing moves: Lacus Bomb and Clyne DDT
Characteristics
Physical Appearance: she has a build body Big Boobs and she a Cute and nice lady
Personality: nice helpful for a newcomer and do what she can
Past/History: After the war with the Gundam and being a chairman of Z.A.F.T long time. She left to do something else and put someone else to take care of Z.A.F.T. after that she got bored don't know what to do and have not seen action for a long time. Then out of the corner of her eyes, she saw a poster of AFW and was curious. She was interested but don't know what to do. She talked to Kira and Kira was okay with it so with her husband's approval she joins. What hope will she bring to the table?
Wrestling Attire:
- Spoiler:
Fun Facts:
AFW Information
Record:
Wins:
Losses:
Draws:
Championships/Accomplishments:
Friends:
Allies:
Rivals:
Enemies:
Crushes:
^ Bio
Last edited by Titanblade19 on Tue Jan 22, 2019 2:09 pm; edited 3 times in total
Titanblade19- Posts : 5
Join date : 2019-01-15
Re: Thunder Clyne
Hi, there.
Going to reject this for now, as there are a few things that really need working on to get this profile to an acceptable level.
1. Expand on the personality, devote a few sentences to it. What's she like, what ticks her off, what are preferences, how does she think, how she feel about wrestling - you don't have to go super indepth, but you need to give a better indication of who she is than that.
2. Physical appearance - 'Big boobs' I get as a description of appearance, not so much 'coordinator' (I think that's a Gundam thing, but it's been so long since I watched that show) Regardless, if you're going to have a section for physical description, you need to get more indepth than that. I'd suggest describing her build and preferred hairstyle, just to give you a good jumping off point.
3. You need to expand way more on the Past/History section, but first and foremost you need to nix the Gundam stuff. In part, this is a little of our fault, we're working on taking steps to solidify what the AFW universe is, but I'm fairly sure it doesn't include Gundams. There's nothing necessarily wrong with taking a character from an anime and making them into a wrestler, plenty of people have done similar things, but you can't bring aspects of their show over to - at least, not when they're science-fiction like that. AFW takes place in the modern day, more or less.
Work on that and I think you'll be good to go. I'd also suggest taking a spellcheck (it's 'clothesline', not 'closeline', for starters), but spelling errors are less of a big deal.
Going to reject this for now, as there are a few things that really need working on to get this profile to an acceptable level.
1. Expand on the personality, devote a few sentences to it. What's she like, what ticks her off, what are preferences, how does she think, how she feel about wrestling - you don't have to go super indepth, but you need to give a better indication of who she is than that.
2. Physical appearance - 'Big boobs' I get as a description of appearance, not so much 'coordinator' (I think that's a Gundam thing, but it's been so long since I watched that show) Regardless, if you're going to have a section for physical description, you need to get more indepth than that. I'd suggest describing her build and preferred hairstyle, just to give you a good jumping off point.
3. You need to expand way more on the Past/History section, but first and foremost you need to nix the Gundam stuff. In part, this is a little of our fault, we're working on taking steps to solidify what the AFW universe is, but I'm fairly sure it doesn't include Gundams. There's nothing necessarily wrong with taking a character from an anime and making them into a wrestler, plenty of people have done similar things, but you can't bring aspects of their show over to - at least, not when they're science-fiction like that. AFW takes place in the modern day, more or less.
Work on that and I think you'll be good to go. I'd also suggest taking a spellcheck (it's 'clothesline', not 'closeline', for starters), but spelling errors are less of a big deal.
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Re: Thunder Clyne
how can I change it I can't do that im new here
Titanblade19- Posts : 5
Join date : 2019-01-15
Re: Thunder Clyne
Will be discussing with Titanblade over PMs
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