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All of blade/speranza wreslters
Sun Apr 07, 2024 12:00 am by Blade/speranza
If you ant a march with any of thme let me know this is also a post for them
Sperzana bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22432-speranza-doncy?highlight=Speranza
Blade bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22536-blade-mccharge-the-blade-of-the-world?highlight=blade
Catherine: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22906-catherine-the-great-celestial?highlight=Catherine
Sperzana bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22432-speranza-doncy?highlight=Speranza
Blade bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22536-blade-mccharge-the-blade-of-the-world?highlight=blade
Catherine: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22906-catherine-the-great-celestial?highlight=Catherine
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Dan Da Man
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Dan Da Man
by DanDaMan Mon Apr 23, 2012 12:29 am
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Re: Dan Da Man
by anegge Mon Apr 23, 2012 7:02 am
[quote="DanDaMan":5qirr1nj]
That sure is a stock photo of a gun. And it's in your character bio for some reason.
Now I know not to step to [your fictional character].
(Get ready here comes quip #2:)
[quote="DanDaMan":5qirr1nj]
Like most people Dan has emotions, the strongest one being anger. When Dan's anger reaches a certain level he goes into a rage. Now, a rage isn't just a tantrum, it's an entirely different conscience that takes over. If not careful Dan can nearly kill anyone who so much as pokes him while he is in this state.
" title="Evil or Very Mad" /> Whoever is in charge of hiring for Tension is fired, because I know we've got three of these guys already.
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NEWS FLASH: the Archergurl who you speaking of is not part of AFW anymore and she's currently working in production for new game titles in Japan. I'm her Canadian friend who she gave her PC due to mines has crashed. She was nice enough to give it to me to help a friend in need. So she got a spared one that she uses for the things I've mention above. BTW, Anegge and Alexandra be sure to check the E-mail adresses carefully. As Archergurl and me aren't the same thing.
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Re: Dan Da Man
by anegge Mon Apr 23, 2012 7:40 am
Okay. I had to take a step back and review things with Tat before I offered actual critique. Here is what is so (hilariously) unacceptable about your character bio.
1. Your character has conflicting unbelievable traits. Namely he accomplished a bunch of tasks that require extreme levels of discipline, but at the same time his main personality trait is his uncontrollable anger. Please also see character's appearance vs his height/weight.
2. Most of your character's traits are "He's good at fighting." and his remaining character trait (i.e. anger) is "but sometimes he gets really good at fighting.
Anyway, it's probably time to start over. There's about one salvageable sentence in this entire thing.
1. Your character has conflicting unbelievable traits. Namely he accomplished a bunch of tasks that require extreme levels of discipline, but at the same time his main personality trait is his uncontrollable anger. Please also see character's appearance vs his height/weight.
2. Most of your character's traits are "He's good at fighting." and his remaining character trait (i.e. anger) is "but sometimes he gets really good at fighting.
Anyway, it's probably time to start over. There's about one salvageable sentence in this entire thing.
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Well.,I think the dust has settled, any other skateboarders around here? - Sparkplug71
NEWS FLASH: the Archergurl who you speaking of is not part of AFW anymore and she's currently working in production for new game titles in Japan. I'm her Canadian friend who she gave her PC due to mines has crashed. She was nice enough to give it to me to help a friend in need. So she got a spared one that she uses for the things I've mention above. BTW, Anegge and Alexandra be sure to check the E-mail adresses carefully. As Archergurl and me aren't the same thing.
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