Re: Critique Thread

[dragonswill]

Ok thanks and my open rp idk how but i got it longer then i wpuld usaly get my rps so thats good i guess lol and yes im using a moble now but when i use my cpu ill do my best so when you see something like this im on mobile i guess lol but i will not do half ass rps i will do the best of my abilltys to have a fun rp like you pros lol

[LunarWolf]

[quote="Rhastiel":34tdmuu7]Okay, sorry to move away from you bean but i want to have a go......so.....Me Next, Me Next

I have been her for a few months now, and done a few rp and had a few matches, got a handful of character as well, so if the people could be kind enough to tell me what I should work on to become better then i would be most glad.


http://afwrpg.informe.com/forum/the-ring-f28/clyde-gastin-vs-the-golden-queen-cecilia-northman-t4675.html

http://afwrpg.informe.com/forum/backstage-f33/strange-friendship-for-tiefblau-t4651.html

http://afwrpg.informe.com/forum/backstage-f33/afw-bar-parttyyyyy-for-everyone-t5084.html

Okay, i suppose these four are good examples of my writing ^_^


Edit: apparently the two links before went to the same place, ehmmm...sorry well here we have a few more matches and stuff.

So.....let's try this again! Please Critique Me!

[Bluemouse]

Bob!

Critique #1 - Be patient. I'm just going to assume that you were talking to me, since there's nobody else here... But anyway. All in good time.

[LunarWolf]

Blargh!

Don't care anymore " title="Razz" />

BYE!

[Bluemouse]

Here's a critique. Well done with the Ciraiyenoing! The way you said "I'm leaving!" and then continued to visit and post about as much as before, but only in GD. Very authentic.

[LunarWolf]

[quote="Rhastiel":1hdzp5zt]Hehe, Well sorry guys!

This place is not really doing it for me anymore, ATM I get super bored when I am on her and gonna write reply, feels more like a chore sometimes than a joy, and way way WAY to much Drama here, for that little enjoyment ! " title="Razz" />

So I am sorry, I'll Return when I find this place fun again, I don't know how long that will take, oh and to Tat, and stuff like that, I have agreed and promised to part take in the Hangman thing, and the match in the December PPV, that hasn't changed, I promised to do that, So I will still do that stuff, just everything else, is officially on an break, with a undetermined time of it starting up again " title="Razz" />


Farväl kära vänner, hoppas vi ses ännu en gång, bortom tidens horisont, och bortom liv och of död " title="Razz" />

Break, Not leaving, the leaving part was a maybe " title="Razz" />....that seems to be coming more true with each passing day " title="Razz" />

[Bluemouse]

Then change the title of the thread! You can't say you're pulling a Ciraiyeno, and then be very specific that you're not doing the thing that he does. Good heavens.

[Kitten]

The ciraiyeno ( and its upgraded Hardcore Ciraiyeno 2.0 version) are an institution in the AFW.

You got to respect our institutions. ò_ó

[Cirno]

I'm the best institute in this forum.

[Kitten]

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