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Post by Zithpith on Tue Nov 17, 2015 6:55 pm

Wish I had seen this sooner, but since I'm here might as well ask.

It might be a bit late but I would appreciate a critique for my second character, (link). But if you've rped with me any general critique of my writing would help too.


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Post by Guest on Mon Jan 25, 2016 10:09 pm

I'll throw my hat into the ring here. I have had a RP and one or two exchanges with people here. So how are my RP's? Anything good, anything bad, how can I make it more exciting for those on the other side of the RP?

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Post by Winner3 on Sun Jan 29, 2017 6:15 am

Gonna take a shot in the dark here and try to revive this thread.

I'll critique/praise the very next person to comment asking for one Smile

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Post by killcarrion on Sun Jan 29, 2017 6:18 am

Lord...almost everyone in the first few pages of this thread isn't on the site anymore. Oh I'm not asking for criticism, I just wanted to point out that unnerving fact.

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Post by PV on Wed Feb 22, 2017 11:01 pm

It's not massively surprising really. People get pissed off with things or decide to move onto new sites.

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Post by scorn53 on Thu Feb 23, 2017 12:28 am

killcarrion wrote: Oh I'm not asking for criticism

HE'S JUST PLAYING COY. ROAST HIM.

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Post by KillerV on Thu Feb 23, 2017 12:33 am

scorn53 wrote:
killcarrion wrote: Oh I'm not asking for criticism

HE'S JUST PLAYING COY. ROAST HIM.

Killcarrion.... you stole my NAME!

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Post by scorn53 on Thu Feb 23, 2017 12:34 am

KillerV wrote:
scorn53 wrote:
killcarrion wrote: Oh I'm not asking for criticism

HE'S JUST PLAYING COY. ROAST HIM.

Killcarrion.... you stole my NAME!

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Post by Harrier on Mon Aug 07, 2017 7:17 pm

Hm, I don´t really know how to start this, so sorry when I turn into ramblings a little bit.

As someone who is basically quite introverted and uses the board for recreation purposes where I have time to answer and don´t have to speak and justify myself to people like at work and can let go of my daily problems, I have the nagging feeling that something in my approach to the site may be wrong.

Why?

Because when I post something in the thread wanted section, it is not a very much sought after theme. This leaves only one or maybe a combination of 4 options to me, with three where I am undecided upon and another which I think is kind of unlikely:
Option 1: Most people feel I can not keep up with them skillwise or my suggestions for threads are not attractive enough. I am inclined to believe that this may be the reason, but on the other hand I have some people I have played multiple times with, so I am unsure about that.
Option 2: My self imposed reclusiveness regarding voice chat is a huge barrier, I may erronously come off as aloof and uninterested in my fellow posters as it is just expected to socialize that way for threads.
Option 3: Nobody reads that section of the forum anyway.
Option 4: Wrong time wrong place, everyone is busy with their good old boys club.^^

I am not asking for your sympathy here, I just want to know where I stand. I would really like to know that so that I could alter my behavior accordingly, aka keep on trying to sell my ideas to people or peddle back and just take what I can get.
I am a grown person and can take it when people say I suck and/or they don´t like my writing style. I am not stupid and know that I can´t quite keep up with the best posters on this site, maybe because I lack their talent or because english is not my native language and I miss the best words and use some more basic words here and there.

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Post by Sylvie on Mon Aug 07, 2017 7:33 pm

1) Don't take the site too seriously.

2) Find characters you would like to face in a match. Come up with a fun idea for a match with that character. Write a PM to the character's owner pitching that match. This is a much more reliable way of finding partners than using the Notice Board.

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